I love you and you love them
And they don’t seem to even care
If I loved you and you loved me,
I would call the life game fair
The game of love is not so fair
When all it does is separate
It pairs the ones that shouldn’t pair
And parts the twos and shapes despair
If I were god or destiny
Or someone who was able
I’d be able just to love you
And our love would be no fable
I might be there just to hold you
When all the tales have passed
To tell you how I once felt
Even though you had to pass
If I told you that I loved you
And that I would die for you,
Would you be there just to hold me?
Would you be there just for me?
Or will you play once more
And let go
Of something oh so real?
Would you be there just to hold me
As I’m holding you so tight?
Should I let go of your body
And just know I’m not without?
Or will you play once more
And let go
Of something oh so real?
Will it be there only one day
Our sacred little game?
The game we’ve played
For oh so long
The game we love to play

September 25th, 2010 at 7:31 pm
vivid and lovely flow,
brilliant piece.
September 26th, 2010 at 4:24 pm
perhaps I will put this link on that page. I don’t know exactly how it works; just gonna leave the link as a comment.
thanks again
September 26th, 2010 at 4:49 pm
I will include your link in my post,
then you simply visit and comment for 18 participants, let me know after you are done…
Glad to have your share your work with us.
September 26th, 2010 at 4:53 pm
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September 26th, 2010 at 4:54 pm
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September 26th, 2010 at 5:05 pm
sure thing!! the pleasure’s all mine. exchanging thoughts and words is very amazing
September 26th, 2010 at 6:22 pm
I’d be able just to love you
And our love would be no fable
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And those are my favorite line.
Happy rally!
September 26th, 2010 at 6:35 pm
thanks!
and happy rally to you!!
Peace
September 26th, 2010 at 9:27 pm
I sometimes find both life and love games aren’t fair! nice words..
Rally Week 29 – My Poem
September 27th, 2010 at 12:00 am
thanks Leo
September 27th, 2010 at 5:14 am
Interesting how love clouds our ability to know for sure if the other person truly loves us or is just playing a game. I also find the game/play idea very interesting because what may look to be a game from one person’s POV could be simply a need or fact of life from the other’s view. Very Good poem!
September 27th, 2010 at 10:07 am
and that’s what shapes the many ups and downs of a relationship i guess. thanks!
September 27th, 2010 at 8:23 am
I like that, nice flow and emotion. (:
http://robinelizabeth58.wordpress.com/2010/09/15/youll-always-be-week29poetrally/
September 27th, 2010 at 10:08 am
and I liked reading you Nightmares Flee
September 27th, 2010 at 10:59 am
I might be there just to hold you
When all the tales have passed
To tell you how I once felt
Even though you had to pass
loved it. been a while since i’ve read something like this…
http://superhero-blues.blogspot.com/2010/04/kites-and-thunderstorms.html
September 27th, 2010 at 11:05 am
you yourself write very uniquely as well Reetam !
September 27th, 2010 at 11:56 am
thanks
i’ve tried my hand at this kind of poetry before, but the flow never seems to come. yours is wonderful
September 27th, 2010 at 12:27 pm
well to me it just has to suddenly “come” you see, for sure it will to you too, at the right time.
September 28th, 2010 at 7:36 am
Life, just like love, is also not fair.
But we should play hard to win, right?
=)
HAPPY RALLY!
LuvLuv,
B
September 28th, 2010 at 10:47 am
yea, in this world many things are in fact not fair; we just learn to live and let go!
thanks
September 29th, 2010 at 5:57 am
what a poem of turns..thanks!
September 29th, 2010 at 9:20 am
thanks Keshav
September 29th, 2010 at 3:56 pm
Why is everyone so sad today? So far, I’ve read 5 really sad poems. But this one is very well written.
September 29th, 2010 at 4:40 pm
oh thanks Vivi ! well I don’t know about others but I’m a tad blue cause in Tehran Autumn has just began and it always brings with it a certain air of melancholy; that’s all.
October 1st, 2010 at 10:52 pm
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October 1st, 2010 at 11:04 pm
Thank you dear Jingle for all you priceless efforts
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January 24th, 2011 at 9:22 am
Life is life. No true love man, unless two never reach each others then there will be a fable which whoever hears it would indeed sigh for it.
January 24th, 2011 at 9:50 am
there’s truth to your words
Peace