Flowers are part of pretty nature
This nature that flows inside us and leaves us filled with love.
Then the light and warmth linger
And we’re left with something even more fulfilling than love.
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The feeling of a single second of rapture
Is all there is to feel when you’re feeling this really sweet love.
It’s all there is for you to be with and not without
The single moment of daring and desire
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That lonely moment of peace and quiet
When the rest of the world is out to play
When they’re all away to play, you stay
Just to play the lonely game
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The game is called but love today
This game you love to play
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My love for you shall ever be even when you’re away
When you’re away, either you play or not
I’ll be always game for all you say
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I’ll care for you as long as I can
As long as you want, I’ll stay
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I’ll be there for you sweet lover
For all I want is you
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And if destiny or something else
Would part our ways at times,
It’s just for us to realize
Just how much we want to be with
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To be with and to do things
That we do while we’re alone
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The games we play and all that shit
We do when we’re alone.

September 25th, 2010 at 7:30 pm
sweet and beautiful sentiments.
well done!
September 26th, 2010 at 6:37 pm
Jingle! now I can see what you’re actually doing!!it’s beautiful, to find a way to connect us even more and share our souls with one another.just want to thank you for doing something SO big. Peace!!
September 26th, 2010 at 4:23 pm
thanks I really appreciate it! this in fact is a very sentimental piece to me
September 27th, 2010 at 4:13 pm
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September 27th, 2010 at 4:14 pm
linked your poem in,
visit and comment for 18 participants from my list would get your work exposed to more poets…
have fun!
September 27th, 2010 at 4:44 pm
hey! already did that, and i’m planning to do even more
this is awesome!
September 27th, 2010 at 4:16 pm
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September 28th, 2010 at 7:17 am
love is really a great thing.
but if it’s really good, compromise and adjustments should be so hard right?
nice one you got here!
=)
September 28th, 2010 at 10:46 am
yes, that IS right
thank you!
September 28th, 2010 at 7:02 pm
awwww…
really sweet poem.
(sorry for sounding cheesy)
September 28th, 2010 at 8:58 pm
it’s alright; sometimes cheesy’s the way to be !!
September 29th, 2010 at 5:50 am
oh wow again. I would love to hear the real story behind this. Nevertheless this portrayed love twined with passion. Good stuff!
September 29th, 2010 at 9:20 am
maybe one day i will tell you !
September 29th, 2010 at 10:21 am
Love talk … nicely done.
Welcome to Rally! Hope you are enjoying yourself.
September 29th, 2010 at 11:28 am
indeed i am!!
thanks Jamie
September 29th, 2010 at 1:01 pm
reminded me of my relatively younger years (about…five years ago)
what i hoped to write but couldn’t really pen…it’s all here.
September 29th, 2010 at 2:32 pm
well I’m glad then to have been able to remind U of good old days !
:p
Peace
September 29th, 2010 at 1:25 pm
sweet:) gave me a tingly feeling inside!! (And, yes, I’m also sorry for sounding cheesy…but couldn’t help it..lol)
September 29th, 2010 at 2:33 pm
it’s okay; cheesy is as cheesy does :p
glad U liked it
Peace
September 29th, 2010 at 10:11 pm
http://superhero-blues.blogspot.com/p/spoils-of-poetry.html
October 1st, 2010 at 11:36 am
oh my god! Reetam! I don’t know how to thank you for even mentioning my name! it means very very much to me my sweet dear friend
may very happy days be upon you
Peace
October 1st, 2010 at 10:51 pm
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October 1st, 2010 at 11:04 pm
simply Grateful !!
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